ext_380252 ([identity profile] battlejoy.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] orange_smaug 2006-04-23 05:19 am (UTC)

Ikkaku wonders how quick death by telling Yumichika he's ugly would be.

Because we ALL know who would get babysitting duty.

Good work on Ikkaku. The tenses seem awkward at times but no other criticisms besides that.

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